Unexpressed feelings
Unknown fear
Silent tear
Grim smile
Loud whisper
Detached attachment
Warm indifference
Cold passion
Agonizing love
Ruffled mind
Fragmented thoughts!!
This was no poetry, only random thoughts! But like a close pal said, "Fragmented but poetically put. And says who a poem can't be fragmented?"
4 comments:
ah! there is a certain beauty in being fragmented! i bet we all love our thoughts to be fragmented at some point...scribble away...
very subtle feelings all of them..i mean each phrase in itself is very
complex..contradicting as it sounds but is very real..we generally link
all these emotions to the heart..but d heart is just another normal organ..its actually our 'ruffled mind'..
@Nawaid
At present it is only fragmented thoughts...no coherence whatsoever.
But even this is an attempt to analyze and make sense of these abstract thoughts!
@Mudit
Thanks for reading it all and so obediently posting your comment.
Yes, the contradiction was deliberate but very real like you said!
And heart vis-à-vis mind is an age old debate. There can be a dedicated entry on this. A comment will not do justice to it :)
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